Kia ora, I am a student at Belfast School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share and Grow.
Friday, July 30, 2021
Holiday Postcard
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Hello Archie I really like your work because Mincraft is one of my favorite games to play when I am at home. Next time you could add some more pictures and you should look throw your work.
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Archie. I like your cool new Mincraft update postcard there is a lot of cool stuff in the update but i don't get it why did you make this and also there are a lot off mistakes like you said I pretended to send it to zack zombies.Please Enjoy! and also like ( Not literally takes my eye out) and the fortress in Minecraft you don't keep a eye out in the fortress it is for grinding exp and also what do you mean about I was.I built and upgrade. This sentence dosent make sense too There should be an upgrade for the Minecraft.I will send you some cool Blocks and tools to use. maybe go back check your work again?
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